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H4ZE vs X
Mar 28, 2014 19:53:26 GMT -8
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Post by Dark Sky on Mar 28, 2014 19:53:26 GMT -8
4 bars(8 lines)
Due 48 hours after we both have checked in
Good luck
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H4ZE vs X
Mar 28, 2014 19:53:40 GMT -8
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Post by Dark Sky on Mar 28, 2014 19:53:40 GMT -8
Check
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Post by X on Mar 28, 2014 21:51:21 GMT -8
HIP HOP CULTURE
Check
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H4ZE vs X
Mar 29, 2014 10:51:30 GMT -8
X likes this
Post by Dark Sky on Mar 29, 2014 10:51:30 GMT -8
Had to dothis quickly cuz I'm most likely gonna be busy the next few days and I don't wanna no show. So here it is I keyed it up real quick.
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X is always hungry to battle emcees like its lunch time
But he sacrifices flow to hit with weak punchlines!
Battlin me is just gonna get this fool wrecked now
I see why his name is X, every battle he gets Xed out!
But nah it's X man, he's the dopest right?
You suck! You think you're dope cuz you own the site!?
Xs punches are week and honestly I'm not feelin his rhymes
I'll leave X with X's in his eyes cuz I'm killin this guy
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H4ZE vs X
Mar 30, 2014 22:00:19 GMT -8
X likes this
Post by X on Mar 30, 2014 22:00:19 GMT -8
HIP HOP CULTURE
Honestly Haze u on that weak flow U suckin dicks on the corner for yo Weeks Growth
Ill Blaze Haze like he Piff Smoke and leave em disappearing into Air like lit Cheebs Bro
This dude rite here be a piss on Elementary bars yo this kids wrong
I go bananas just like that Drake song "On my worst behaviour" Ill Fry em like a Dang Bong
X will shatter yo dreams kid Bash yo face in wit that beam bitch
And if Haze keep running his mouth Ill come swinging till his lips split
This dude str8 wiggity whack run up on em and twist his neck fuckin back
Dawg u betta relax before I bash yo head in with a dull bat till yo skull go and crack
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H4ZE vs X
Mar 31, 2014 12:51:26 GMT -8
X likes this
Post by DB on Mar 31, 2014 12:51:26 GMT -8
Both had some real nice Bars
I liked X's verse as he produced more Multies with a nice Delivery.
H4ZE Was on point and I think this was very close, X on the battle tip though Good luck to both emcee's here.
MVGT - X
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Post by X on Mar 31, 2014 21:03:03 GMT -8
HIP HOP CULTURE
G'Looks DB Thanks for the honest opinion!!!!
And good battle pimpin!!!!
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Post by EL1TE on Apr 4, 2014 14:21:00 GMT -8
X - Your flow is still weak. You had good multis and a good rhyme scheme but your flow just didn't work.
H4ZE - Your bars seemed kinda generic but you had a good flow and overall i liked your rhymes and flow, and your punches were good, it seemed like X was just making lines about how he can split your lips or crack your skull open.
MVGT - H4ZE
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Post by X on Apr 5, 2014 21:17:01 GMT -8
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I would have to dissagree with my flow being weak homie u aint reading it rite lmao
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Post by EL1TE on Apr 10, 2014 18:51:27 GMT -8
There isn't much to disagree with tbh. You aren't really constructing bars, so the reader has to try to construct their own flow with it. That shouldn't be the case, if you had regular bars the flow would be the way you want it to be and the way the readers read it. Only trying to help you elevate bro. Cause your bars were ok but the flow was weak man. Stay up tho.
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